Feedback and Suggestions

[voidtreckermods]

Voidtrecker Express

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(OOC Note: There is a text box underneath the message. If passengers touch it, an on-screen keyboard pops up for their use. Alternatively, they can speak while pressing the box, and their words will be transcribed.

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Comments

[nutkrusher]

Hey, sup. Thanks for the double rooms, they're really nice.

I'm guessing if you've got ears, you heard the complaint from Bulma in the back of the train. I think she's got a point. Any chance you could waive the seniority requirement for married couples? Just throwing that out there. Seems fair to me.

[voidtreckermods]

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( sent some time after the train adds its carriages... )

[adregem]

Now that I know for sure you're actually listening to our suggestions, it's safe to say that this message isn't going to fall into the void. Pun intended.

Hey, amenities are all well and good. Trust me, I know all about the good stuff. But if you could maybe spare a carriage or two for actual work to be done, that'd be highly appreciated. A huddle room for team chats before the missions you send us on, in particular. We've been doing just fine using up the gyms and music cars for these get-togethers, but it sets a different mood when you come together as a team in a room meant for the same purpose. Plus, it helps that we're not taking up space from passengers who actually want to work out, play, or relax.

Something to consider for your next upgrade. Thanks.

- Roland C.

[voidtreckermods]

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[katzenpfote]

[As prompted by Tidus, Caleb types in -]

change my name to Caleb Widogast

[voidtreckermods]

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[labcatte]

[After a certain run-in with Dio, Bacon finds they have a point of curiosity they need to satisfy.]

Why DON'T we have a crocodile car, anyway?

[voidtreckermods]

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[blue_ice]

Keep the lab car option in the next poll. We still need it.

[voidtreckermods]

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[miseris_socios]

lab car lab car LAB CAR

[voidtreckermods]

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[so_dark_a_road]

I agree with Kaiba. We need a laboratory car, preferably with all sorts of equipment included. Could you please put this option on the next poll?

[voidtreckermods]

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[wisdominshadows]

[ooc: sent about an hour after the Llama mission]

I don't suppose you know anything about the entity we just encountered, do you?

[voidtreckermods]

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llama 14, voice to text

[blitzcheer]

Hey. [ Grumble grumble grumble. ]

I'm here to complain about food again. Thanks - I guess - for the Japanese food, but we still barely end up with anything at the end of a mission. You've got some really big eaters on board, and I mean they need more, and these missions are hard work! Don't believe me? Look at your own stores. Or ask everyone! You ever thought about that? You hold those votes and ask stuff sometimes, so you can ask questions.

I don't know half the stuff anyone asks you. But if you work on some weird tally, you know, some people don't bother asking for anything because it's hard to know what you'll listen to!

[ LIKE ALL OF HIS GREAT IDEAS. ]

But I'm here trying to work with you for...some reason. [ There was a pause here, for consideration. ] You want something more from us than just to do these missions, right? Your lost crew, that weird...world eating thing out there. You're starting to let us know more, but don't you think you should try being more honest? We've done how many missions 'cause of you? And we've had to carry ourselves though them all! Other people know things. Void people! I bet they get more gear than some clothes to and a tent when they go out! So what gives with us?

Anyway. If you can't get in stuff easy, then... you should let us go to planets more. Off-missions. Let us get our own supplies, extra food or weapons or fancy gadgets. Let people get off this train for more than a day or two! We can't go anyway even if you did, so what's the worry?

If you don't know where people'd like, just...ask. You can find any world where void people don't go, can't you?

[ Another pause. ]

Okay, I can't remember any other stuff I wanted to bring up. But...yeah! Just communicate with us! Been tellin' you that since the start. [ MUMBLE MUMBLE. ]

[voidtreckermods]

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llama 15, voice to text

[blitzcheer]

Hey... you had photos of some passengers on the roster before. Olivia, Gyousou. His name was somethin' like...Sou Boku on the roster.

They have close friends and family on the train still, good friends of mine, Inigo and Taiki. Can you bring them up? Those photos. Even just for a minute so I can take a picture for them! So I can give them to them.

[ There's a pause here, to only indication he's not done the fact he hasn't closed the form yet. ]

...And...Yuna too, if you remember her. Mmhrgh...

[voidtreckermods]

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But then a moment later the roster image of Olivia comes up, for about thirty seconds, before fading and being replaced by Sou Boku and then finally Yuna.]

[miseris_socios]

You know I'm just gonna keep shouting 'lab car' into this form until you give us one, right?

[voidtreckermods]

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llama 16, voice to text

[blitzcheer]

[ Guess who loves just speaking and not having to type anything now that he's figured out that option. THIS GUY!! ]

Has anyone said we need a car for pets? 'Cause I'm starting to think we're gonna need one once missions come around. There's so many cats now!

But that's not the only reason I'm here. I'm here again about this communicating business I talked about before. So, are you just taking people from all these different worlds 'cause you wanna help save worlds that bad, or does this have to do with that old train crew of yours? You're being real sneaky about it - a train can't want to be a mission craft that badly it'd turn criminal to do it, can it? So I don't think that's the reason at all! Or you'd just find some way to do it with whatever crews are out there doing this thing that want to!

What happened anyway? Do you know? There was some memory about your home base planet or somethin' getting taken out... and then everyone had a meeting about something. Is that person on the video logs one of them? Who is that.. Via... uh... V-something.

...hey, speaking of memories, or dreams... wasn't there one about about people losing their voices? Some weird dream... about just going forward... Ergh!

[ Spooky! ]

Uh, anyway. So this whole dumb ride you say you're sorry about kidnapping people for has been going on for how long? Nearly a year? A year's a really long time for most of us, you know. I'm like, eighteen now! I'm not supposed to be eighteen, but, uh...

Look, can't we just have a better idea about what it is you want? You're putting your mission before all the stuff we had going on back on our worlds. Saving people's great and all, but what about the people who were doing that on their world, you know? Keeping the peace, being their doctors, keeping their own friends alive?

If you've heard it all before, then too bad, you're gonna hear it whenever I use this thing! And I've got a lot of time because you stuck me here!

[ Pah!! ]

I'll be back again! Tidus, over and out!

Re: llama 16, voice to text

[voidtreckermods]

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[flatteries]

i'm not really sure why we have to pay to use those private rooms in that one carriage

i mean you already took us here and we are already participating in missions and doing everything and then we still have to pay just to have a space for ourselves for a while that doesn't really seem fair to me

i don't know if you understand but privacy isn't exactly something you have to earn usually

can't you give us those rooms to use for free or else give us some sort of dance studio with private practice rooms because it's hard to dance in public when you're shy

[voidtreckermods]

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llama 17

[blitzcheer]

New arrivals, new day. It's you and me time, train. Wouldn't have yesterday been a good time for you to do some talking, stopped at the platform? Hah, yeah, like you would!

You still have a lousy way of doing all this. 'Sorry I'm doing this to you, but I'm not gonna even give you your own gear to go out and fight'? Yeah, you BET I'm still on about how we had to help people have their own lunchboxes and drink bottles! Only 'cause we had a guy who could do that for us.

Piccolo, by the way. Big green namekian guy who loved a good fight and helping people out.

[ And don't you forget it!! ]

People come and go from here, never really knowing what was going on. If you've done something to us, never having a choice...

You know that's what really pisses me off about this. Choice. You say you're sorry, but it's not like you answer anything for it. The void has missionaries! So why do you need us? What's your plan? Why don't you just tell us already?!

[ There's a pause, then a groan, for whatever that translates as; a sigh as Tidus sits in his room in a small silence. ]

...When I got taken to Spira, someone never told me the truth going on there they knew. The lies that kept that world going in a spiral of death. Summoners sacrificed for the lie they'll stop people from dying. He wanted us to see it. Telling wouldn't have been enough.

If there's anything to see here - what you want us to see - I don't. Because you only show us...nothing! Worlds in need, worlds that could have other people saving them. I see people come together and I see us do good things the places we go to, but I see the people torn apart too!

It's always the same question: What's your goal? What's your plan here? What does keeping us in the dark do? What happened back on that planet that got wiped out? What did the old crew do?

[ There's a small silence as Tidus stares at the ICP screen, then gets real close to it and drones: ]

TELLLL USSSS THE TRUUUUUTHHHHHHHHHHHH.

[ puh. pah puh!! Screw it, he's ending it there. ]

Re: llama 17

[voidtreckermods]

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llama 18, voice to text from the kitchen

[blitzcheer]

I don't have time to deal with you today but I'LL BE BACK TOMORROW.




TELL TAIKI AND INIGO HAPPY BIRTHDAY.

[voidtreckermods]

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Happy Birthday voidtrecker Taiki. Happy Birthday voidtrecker Inigo.

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llama 19

[blitzcheer]

[ GUESS WHO'S BACK, TRAIN.

With a book of notes on his lap, sitting with legs folded. It's you and him, train...!! ]

vian tail

what did vian do. vian and xela

[voidtreckermods]

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Llama 17

[thawed_pride]

We have at least one passenger who is lactose intolerant yet insists upon consuming dairy regardless. I would greatly appreciate it if you would add artificial lactase enzyme supplements and lactose-free dairy products to our regular supplies.

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[voidtreckermods]

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[adropofsunlight]

It's been a while since we talked. Sorry about that. I've not really had that much to really talk about.

But with a friends birthday, it made me realize. When I got pulled here it was meant to be my birthday the next day. But with time being different I never actually...got to have my birthday. So I don't even know if I actually turned 18 or not. I mean I guess not since my age is still classed as 17.

But that's not what I wanted to complain about, I actually didn't want to complain at all. But um... well... can we even age here? How does it work? Also...I want to do something nice for others who even though we don't know how birthdays work.

I'm sure you won't actually say anything, but I figured I would at least ask.

I also would like to ask how are you today? Do you need me to paint anything for you?

[voidtreckermods]

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Llama 18, voice

[fivemilesdeep]

Can I be switched to purple team, please? I keep going on their missions anyway, and I'm...not good at what orange team does, so it might be easier.

[voidtreckermods]

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[namethattune]

Given the number of active scientists on board, I believe we are past the point of debating a lab car's use. I would request that you provide one, if only so the other cars remain less prone to explosions.

[voidtreckermods]

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[miseris_socios]

Please give us a lab car?

Please?

[voidtreckermods]

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llama 23

[jingyeets]

[ Oh look, Jingyi's been introduced to the feedback function. Which he doesn't get the writing part at first, so it may be grumbling on his end until the tapping out of characters? The voidtrecker writing system? There goes his headache, only increasing.

Either way, duly written: ]

Greetings to the Voidtrecker Express, I'll be troubling you. No, really, I will, because now I'm here, so until I'm sent back, all I've got is plenty of troubling to do, since we're all equally troubled here. So let's start with this:

Why are our rooms so tiny? Those things that pass as beds barely work for people of average height and build, let alone those who are larger! Why is each room smaller than a, a, I don't know, smaller than something small? We spend half our time on this train, and you won't even give us shared sleeping spaces where we can stretch out or comfortably sleep or sit all four at a table to discuss things? Instead you stack us two high and pack us in like you think we're rabbits in a warren? We're not! I'm confidently saying we are not! Have you even offered a way for the tall ones and the big ones and I don't know, those of us who fall off beds because we move around at night can actually be comfortable?

Please, please, let our rooms be larger! With beds that work for everyone! And space to stretch out on the floor! I'll even meditate, and it means I'll complain less to you, that's a win! I think it's a win.

We're already pulled out of our lives to be here. If you're interested in at least making us somewhat less miserable when we have actual duties back there, when we have people who count on us there, too, can we have decent living spaces here? You travel through the Void, and that's headache inducing by the way for trying to watch it, because of course I tried I'm used to there being an outside to look at when I'm in any vessel this whole space feels super claustrophobic, but! If you can figure out how to do all that and make half these carriages work like you do, can you figure out larger rooms? I'm not even saying fewer people in a room! Only makes sense to share spaces, even if it's with a bunch of strangers with completely different things they consider normal and sane to do. Beds twice as wide, long enough to sleep in! Tables to work at! And folded up, enough space to move.

Come on, there's got to be a way, I believe in you! I don't have much of a choice, but whatever, I still choose to. After being at this temple place and getting to fully stretch out for the first time in weeks and yet still coming back each night to these tiny cramped sleeping spaces, I'm exhausted. Exhausted!

Looking forward to future feedback sessions,
Lan Jingyi

[ Has it necessarily been weeks? No, but congratulations, this is Jingyi, Voidtrecker Express. ]

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llama 22 - voice to text

[blitzcheer]

You don't have a good concept of time, do you.

You took us to this place to learn how to fend against illusions - great, but for three days? Couldn't you even give us a week? Do you know what a week is? You know, seven days?

This is stuff you should want us to learn anyway when we're doing these jobs because of you! Which explains why you even bothered to take us here.

How about those answers to what your end goal is, huh? Those coming any time soon? Some actual proper cooperation? Yeah? No? Thinking about it?

[voidtreckermods]

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llama 24

[jingyeets]

[ He's baaaack. ]

Greetings, Voidtrecker Express, I'll be troubling you.

Have you been considering my request? I can't be the only one who's complained about this, there's no way. I've heard people have been onboard for eight months? Ten? A year? How they're not going out of their heads living in such small spaces is anyone's guess, you can't even stretch out properly in there! It's not a refuge of quiet or rest or privacy with your three roommates anything else, it's packing ten chickens in a tiny chicken house!

Look, there's a whole bunch of us on this train, and from what I understand, that wasn't always the case. There was a crew, that went missing? Which must have been lonely and scary for you, I get that. We run Night Hunts with groups because people watching your back and working with you is how we end up with fewer injured and dead at the end of the day, night, whatever. You need a group to do your Night Hunts through the Void, I get it, I promise. I don't like the whole abduction thing, that's happened more than once in my life and that's officially more than anyone should be abducted ever, especially for cultivators, but! Whatever, okay, fine, we're here.

Can we at least get decent sized rooms to stay in? Please?

Talk to you again tomorrow!
Lan Jingyi

[ He bows to the screen after, one hand held in the other. ]

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llama 25

[jingyeets]

[ We are so sorry for interrupting your regularly scheduled services of people who are more useful at this than Lan Jingyi, who is back looking soaked, for this and that reason. He's got one of the four-crystal pendants hanging from his waistband, for what it's worth. ]

Greetings, Voidtrecker Express, I'll be troubling you.

So was there a reason to only pause for a breather on a world that's apparently helping train us to fight illusion arrays for only three days? I'm all for intense training sessions, but this goes from intense to intensely shortsighted. Are you going to have us keep training onboard? I mean, you could try actually asking, there's a number of people who have to be able to set up arrays that can help with this stuff, were you trying to hint around to it?

Which leads me back to my point. We could stretch our limbs, really move around, and now we're back to this. We didn't even get to sleep off train this whole time! Have you been paying attention to how cramped these spaces are? Tell me you're somehow failing to see all the people who don't fit well on these beds, or how there's only so many quiet rooms, or the whole thing I just figured out, you put a Points Barrier over private rooms to... earn back the points you give us? I don't even understand that anyway, it's the weirdest bribery system I've seen since all it does it recycle back to you the fake currency we never had so that we can wheedle things out of your store? Now we have to wheedle a larger bed for a night out of you? Okay, that's totally not sounding like a scam, great, great.

Look, the chores, those make sense, I'm thankful you don't leave us to starve, the showers are weird but workable, you've got really convenient latrines, and the spring isn't so bad even if it's blazing hot instead of burning cold and full of spiritual energy. But the room sizes. The bed sizes. They can stay stacked, but please! Make them longer! Wider! Give us room to work in rooms, sleep in there too obviously, but use those spaces for more than one function! Or two functions.

Also, most the fish I caught managed to shove into extra spaces in the kitchen, which was nice. Can we get additional food stores? It'd be nice if we can start stocking up whenever it's possible off ship and not have to worry about food.

Write to you again soon,
Lan Jingyi

[ Another proper bow. ]

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