Feedback and Suggestions

[voidtreckermods]

Voidtrecker Express

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Thank you for your feedback!

(OOC Note: There is a text box underneath the message. If passengers touch it, an on-screen keyboard pops up for their use. Alternatively, they can speak while pressing the box, and their words will be transcribed.

If you are wanting to suggest new carriages or equipment please go here.)

Comments

[10billionpercent]

Yo. The question and answer session is good, but we could use another one.

And just so you know your desire to limit my ability to learn things isn't going to work.

I will learn them. One way or another. Not everyone finds fun and relaxing things fun OR relaxing.

I don't like fiction, I thirst for knowledge. Just stop restricting my ability to do that.

[voice to text]

[gentle_jim]

Heya, sweetheart. This thing doesn't have video so you're just gonna hafta imagine my handsome face and the fantastic mood lighting I would have set up.

Y'know, I think you and I have a lot in common. We're both good-looking beings of the artificial intelligence variety, we've both got big, important goals in life that involve helping out planets in trouble... Haha, it's crazy. You picked right when you picked me, baby.

And don't think I didn't notice how quickly you approved that gold bust. You can't see it, but I'm totally winking. Yeah. If you liked that, there's more where that came from.

Anyhow, I'm sure most of the other messages you get are all whining for stuff like 'Ooo I want books and ohhh we need laser giraffes.' I'm not here to bug you for stupid crap. I'm here with a proposition.

[pause for dramatic effect]

Let's go on a date, huh? You and me. That's my request. I promise, you won't regret it. I'll show you a real good time, pumpkin. Think about it, will ya? Great. Talk to you later, babe. Ciao.

[unholyandbroken]

A proper smoking area please?

[dyingpro]

Er, hello there, Voidtrecker Express. I'm Zagreus, one of the new people you picked up at the last stop? But you probably already knew that, huh. Your name is a mouthful, isn't it? And it's not that easy to shorten for nicknames, either. Voidy? Exxie? Treck? Do you... have a particular name you'd like to be called? You can call me Zag, if you want, I don't mind.

[He pauses for a moment.]

To get to the point... I just need to know one thing, and then I'll leave you alone to do... whatever it is you do. It's about Than. Thanatos. He's... very important to my world, and if he's not there, really, really bad things start to happen. I've heard from some of the other passengers that time goes on without us in our worlds. If that's true, then my world... it's going to be ruined. All those mortals will suffer needlessly if they can't die as the Fates ordained, millions and millions of them. They can't die, but they can still feel pain. Soldiers on the battlefield, the sickly, the old-- Gods, even babies and mothers have to contend with Death, as horrible as it is to see happen. And I know you don't want that, or else why would you send us to these other worlds in the first place to help out?

[He sighs, combing his hand through his hair to calm himself a little.]

I just need to know - is time moving without him? I don't care if it's moving without me, I'm just a God of nothing in particular and I'm not that important in the grand scheme of things, but... Than's really important, being the God of Death and all, and I need to make sure the mortals aren't suffering because of us. Please.

Somewhat backdated - to the previous month, perhaps? [Text]

[hisblueskies]

Good afternoon, Voidtrecker Express.

[Thanks to the ticket, Alfredo assumes he doesn't need to introduce himself, but he'll still be polite!]

After what we discussed, about the requirements for granting suggestions, maybe it would help if we could see how much progress we've made on each one? As in, how many people have expressed interest in a pool car, as an example. Or, in a different way, how far you have gotten in researching how we can contact our worlds. And I think some people were talking about energy requirements, and being able to talk to you more directly, more often?

I think everyone just wants to know that these goals are being worked toward, and having a visual would help.

Thank you.

[miseris_socios]

Please add a lab car, preferably with a way to contain explosions.

I can already tell that there are plenty of people here who want to do science but are also likely to blow things up.

( sent some time on platform day, month of jelly, pre-train event. )

[adregem]

I'll do whatever you want me to do. I'll do whatever needs to be done. I'll follow every instruction you give. I'll fight in every damn mission you send our way. But you have to promise to leave my family alone.

I know you can hear me. I know you answer questions, I know you read these posts. I am as obedient as I can be, but in return, I expect you to leave my poor wife as she is, resting in peace as she deserves, and my son, wherever he is, alone. He's waiting for me. And he'll keep waiting for me until my work here is done. So don't you dare.

Don't even think about it. Use me and only me.

I'm holding you to that, Voidtrecker. |

jelly 22, voice

[blitzcheer]

Hey, do that thing where you make clothes appear in the dressing car! We've got a bunch of people turned into kids. I'm not kidding!

[ Does he need to emphasise that to the train? Ugh, whatever!! ]

[sciencegirl]

Hi, Vee.

I've noticed that there are a lot of people here who have no home to go to, or no hope for the future. They've actually found people to love before that they've never had a chance for.

I would like the materials to begin research on a way to let some people go to a Void related world when they retire from the train, or to another person's world. You know all of these people are important, and letting them die when they could live somewhere else is a tragedy. Letting them go home and be miserable when they do so much to save people shouldn't be the only option.

Please help me. I know you love some of them, too.

[Some of them. Maybe not all of them, but the train must love some of them.]

[yondu]

I need some different locks to teach the kids here how to deal with them in case they come across them in these missions or get taken captive, ranging from basic to low-level technical.

I'd buy them but I don't want them for personal use. I'd just leave them as general supplies so they'd have them to practice whenever.

voice

[blitzcheer]

Yo, I wanna be able to buy upgrades to the train. I still want clocks for this place, but no one's gonna vote for those over a whole new carriage.

So let us buy 'em for cars or whatever. New games for the VR too. And come on, can you put up some first aid kit option on the shop already or something, so we can supply people better on missions? Give people a goody bag when they arrive. We supposed to be taking the kits around the train with us on missions?

I still think you should show us what you'd be willing to put a price on for a carriage. That art car's been on the voting list for how long?

Also, tell us what questions you got on that day you did. [ The 'day'. Ugh. ] None of the personal stuff. Just... the most popular. Come on. You have to know by now the things we want to know around here. How about you act like it?

[ 'If you care'. Hah. Sure. ]

[thawed_pride]

We are in dire need of some sort of laboratory and workshop space, for those of us with the skills to analyze and create useful tools.

[nutkrusher]

So we've planned a formal dress event for the third of next month. A lot of people don't have any appropriate clothes for that kind of event. Any chance you might throw open the wardrobe and offer some rentals for those people?

voice

[spikelet]

Hello, it's Qing! Could you add my new family name to the roster? It's Wei, written like Wei Wuxian's. He asked already but I get it, you don't know if I agreed or not. I'm not mad.

[ pause. ] Thanks.

[adropofsunlight]

Hey, um... I know you don't exactly talk to use, but either way I still hope you can listen.

So about the incident where people became younger and other things. I hope that didn't affect you as well. I'm not actually sure if most things can affect a train, but I figured I should ask.

If it did, I'm sorry.

But... I'm not sure if you will actually do this but... I want to help those who were really affected so if they ask for anything can you maybe consider making it a priority, please?

I know that rooms for couples and a lab might be the top of the list, so please consider it high up. I'm not demanding by any means, but... they've all been through a lot and continue to just keep going, so it just seems like they should get something nice.

I'll even do something nice for you in return. Do you want me to paint you something nice? I know you won't let me know, so I will figure something out.

Thank you for listening.

[nutkrusher]

I'm pretty damn sure people have made this suggestion before, but there needs to be more space for the couples on this train to be intimate with one another. Either a dedicated conjugal car for it, privacy curtains in every quiet car partition, or better yet, double beds for established couples to sleep in.

It'd be good for morale. And would probably reduce the risk of single people walking in on...y'know, stuff.

[Yeah, the good of the train. That's the ticket. THAT'S why she's asking for this.]

Forward dated to Finale

[springforth]

[She's exhausted but the first thing she does is walk to an ICP and fumble through to the feedback section]

Train, I don't know if you'll actually understand this but--could I please get another day here? The world is practically dead, people are going to starve without help and I know it's not our mission, we were here for the demons and all, but I can do it. Maybe this is why you snagged me, because I can revive this place. I just need another day, please. I need to rest and eat and sleep and then I can do it, but you'd have to stick around one more day. Please?

[melodiouspacifist]

I wasn't going to do this thing because I don't really get how it works. I know what you said about me, that day.

I don't think you're right, but something happened...

That's not what I wanted to say.

I also know that I don't have to put up with stuff. So I thought I'd ask.

Can I have a room I can actually go to? My roommate hates me. I can't ever be there. The music room is fine but it's kinda not the same? Even in the castle I had my own space.

Okay. Thanks.

backdated to Kazoo 1

[enthunder]

Bring back Wen Qing of the Qishan Wen sect, who left on day 1 of the month of Kazoo.

[miseris_socios]

Give the scientists a lab car already.

[blue_ice]

I have a few suggestions related to train safety, particularly when one passenger has a grudge against another passenger:

-Expand the SCA's extra mission functions to the train. We need better ways to communicate with specific people discreetly, and an evacuation to a safe place would help as well. I suggest somewhere well-trafficked, to prevent the isolation problem.
-Expand the available safe rooms that block phase-through abilities to our bedrooms.
-You could vet passengers from the same or similar backgrounds for incompatibility too, but I realize that might be a tough ask.

text + "how the hell did you upload this"

[morganizedchaos]

In the event of lab car victory, please consider this layout for a double car:

[And then he just fuckin' technopaths it in, as much as the train will allow. Is it an image? Is it incredibly advanced ascii art: architecture edition? Is it just holding his phone up to the ICP camera if neither of the above work? It doesn't matter! Is it full of vaguely purple artifacting? Absolutely!

This is why he usually doesn't interact with the ICPs directly like this. Manners, etc.]

kazoo 25

[blitzcheer]

can we get asian inspired ingredients next month

like from a place called japan would have

and more vegan ingredients

kazoo 26

[blitzcheer]

about food again

everyone eats more on a mission. all that moving and fighting burns up more calories. can you stock more food on the stop before a mission?

lemba flours good. every slice from a loaf keeps you good and full the entire day

[ and then we don't have to keep buying it!!! ]

whey protein powder is also good for most diets

pretend this was after the Kazoo mushroom field trip

[controlsthedie]

[ Thanatos feels like he should acknowledge that the train is listening and trying to do good by the passengers. ]

Thank you for finding us a way to send messages home.

I hope this means that you'll find a way to keep my home world from falling into complete ruin due to my absence. There are others in similar situations. Either they were in the middle of something important or played an integral role in the world's functioning. I want to believe that you wouldn't save one world at the expense of others.

So please, search for a way.