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...wait. Tidus stares at the ICP screen in confusion, and, wondering if that was a fluke- ]

...Are you talking to us now?

[ ???? ]

[ A moment later a text box pops up on the screen. ]

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[ The text box and Tidus' message both fade from the screen. ]

[ There's a groan - typical! - and Tidus gives the screen a dirty look. He doesn't bother selecting to send another message. ]

'Course you aren't. [ MUTTER MUTTER GRUMBLE. Fine, see if he cares!! ]

[ .. Inigo stares at the screen, looking like he's been caught off guard. He's so used to seeing the usual message pop up that he really didn't expect there to be more - but there is. And exactly about the matter he was most worried about of all.

His hand grips at his chest, grabbing onto a handful of shirt as he stares at the message as it disappears.

At least there's something, for once. He's too worried to let too much hope in over it, but there's something, he thinks, as he leaves the terminal alone again. ]

Hey, so... I'm probably not the only one who's going to give you a message about how you'll need to let us visit more void active worlds if you want us to potentially be able to find out about what might have happened to your missing crew. Thing is, I'm pretty sure you know that already.

I'm not gonna lie and tell you everyone on board is happy with what you're doing- bringing us here and all- cause most of us aren't to one degree or another. But the thing is... we're all on the same team here. And we need to trust each other. I know that can be hard, and even scary sometimes. But we've gotta do it. Right now, us and you... we're all we've got. So just... think about it OK? You do right by us, trust us, I think you'll find that most people here'll return the favor.

...And I also just wanted to say too, that... well, I get it. What it's like to lose a friend, and not have any idea what happened to them. And to feel like... to kinda wonder if might have been your own fault that it happened, even if the logical part of you knows that's not true, at least not completely. So... I can't speak for anyone else, but whatever else happens, I'm gonna do what I can to help you find your friends. Got it memorized?

[ A moment later a text box pops up on the screen. ]

It has been stored in the data banks.

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[ The text box and Lea's message both fade from the screen. ]

There's a lot I could say, but I know it takes processing power for you. So I'll keep this brief. And not harp on subjects we've covered previously. If there's anything else you can find in your memory banks about your past before us, please tell us. We're making some progress on learning about your world, and we want to do more. And thank you for bringing me to Yugi. He means more to me than I ever thought possible, and given how many people we've lost lately, we want to formalize our bond. So we'd like to hold a small ceremony. Could you load the dressing car with formal wear for any teammates who want to join us on the 19th?

[ A moment later a text box pops up on the screen. ]

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[ The text box and Seto's message both fade from the screen. ]

(And when he checks on the 19th, the dressing carriage is open)

Greetings. I would like you to provide a list of carriages currently available that were present with the previous crew. With it I will attempt to peer into your past and recover information that is lost to you.

If there is a way to grant access to carriages no longer present at the next platform visit, I would also like to request this for the same attempt to look into your past.

Key possessions or items of significance from that time period would also be useful.

Thank you for your time.

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[ The text box and Elidibus' message both fade from the screen. ]

If you could bring in more red team members soon that'd be great. We can handle a lot, but we can't handle everything if our numbers are too small.

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[ The text box and Otoha's message both fade from the screen. ]

[Someone is Upset at being pulled back from a mission where his skills would have been useful. ~~He has no idea.~~]

What happened? There's a group of us that tried to go on the mission and we couldn't - why?

[But...he might not get an answer for that. Might as well try for something that might get a response.]

Can you at least give us a warning before they come back so we can prepare? If you know when that'll be.

[He gets no reply.]

[OK, it'd never not be amusing when people took his catchphrase literally, and somehow the train doing it was even more so.]

Heh, right... Keep at it and you might just develop a sense of humor, VT.

[That's about all the reply he expects, so he doesn't bother posting another message.]

Greetings, Voidtrecker Express, I'll be troubling you.

Do all your months have thirty one days? I'd ask if that was the moon cycle or anything for you, but the Void doesn't have a moon. How do you track time? What do you decide the length of our days or our months by? How much time has it been since you started abducting people on train? How long was it from when your older crew disappeared?

I can't figure out the month name thing either, so we're in Merriment, what're you going to call the next month? If it's that arbitrary then is everything about time here arbitrary. How much time is actually passing. When do we notice we've gotten older? How do you track birthdays. Is there an age of majority on you? Or in the place you came from originally. I assume not, or else you've got kid here who're too young to use a courtesy name but you're having them go on missions.

Well, opening them to the possibility. How you've managed to mostly grab people who want to help versus want to say you can sink yourself and sit on board doing nothing is a mystery.

Anyway, if it's the thirty first, does that mean tomorrow is the first, are we about to platform? Remember! The candy! Try to do the candy for everyone! Call it a bribe of morale before you run off with us to the next Night Hunt and whatever it's going to be, it has to be less insane than the one with Chaos.

Which a thank you or apology would have been nice for.

Fretfully yours,
Lan Jingyi

Greetings, Voidtrecker Express, I'll be troubling you.

Nebula! What the hell is that. Merriment made sense even if nothing was particularly merry, and I still don't know what Llama was supposed to mean, so now we're back to another one that makes no sense. Also, hello! Platform day! Notice what was not on anyone's pillow after... candy! That's right!

Also I'm sitting here tapping this letter out to you and wondering why we can write to you but not each other? Why can't we just send messages to the ICPs on train, or I guess to individuals. Why does nothing let us write to each other, only to you? I never thought I'd miss writing and I'm not sure this even counts, but now I want some kind of writing paper just to use it to leave people notes.

Okay, noticing also! Still no improvements to the greenhouse carriage. Maybe we can focus on the garden carriage instead? Add a second level there for more space to grow food? We've got rabbits, we can use their leavings to help fertilize things, and this is where my grand plan for the chickens comes in hand again! Though do they need bugs... what do chickens eat, vegetables? Insects? Grain? If we ever got infested by void bugs I bet they could eat them! Also think of the advantages of having all their eggs. Eggs! Those can be used for so many things!

Seriously though what's with the ingredient for the month, yadon tail? Is it like beef tail? None of the recipes were for beef tail soup and that is criminal.

Also, just reminding, some of us are mostly vegetarian, so keeping in mind things we can eat more and not just a meat option for the month would be nice? I can eat meat too, but I think my seniors have more trouble with it than I do, and then people like Taiki, you know. Keep it in mind if we're going to continue being stranded in your belly or whatever this counts as. Your stomach worms want better caring.

Yours in thinking that metaphor is gross why did I write it,
Lan Jingyi

Greetings, Voidtrecker Express, I'll be troubling you.

I don't know why I dreamed of eggs last night but I will tell you it was annoying. Also, lets talk about the Void? Staring into it? Sure would be nice if it felt less like staring into a place you're falling into and out of at the same time. I try to avoid looking, it's unsettling, but the staring... ugh.

What makes it... how does the going golden thing work? Where are the people who disappear from the train? Why do some leave, and some stay? How the hell do you get us here in the first place? Wen Sizhui's on there right now, you take care of him, whatever it is he's doing or not doing or whatever. He's not the guy I know back home, but he also is, and Sizhui is a worthwhile person to keep around but that means also he should go home. There's so many of the people here who should, that this should be a choice, to stay or go, not like it is now.

If you have no control over it either, can you at least say that?

In some convoluted and conscripted way yours,
Lan Jingyi

Greetings, Voidtrecker Express, I'll be troubling you.

I know it's a countdown to the next world you stop us at, but for everyone's sake, can this not be one riddled with illusions? I'm assuming Chaos is not the plan, but chaos seems to be every time.

Back on beds. Please. Please can we have longer beds? Longer before wider, I'll take the small compromises, and by small I mean the larger ones. The rooms still suck for anything to do, it's hard to even meditate or cultivate in meditation there, and what's the point of a small space used for only one thing? Bigger! Rooms! Can be multifunctional for things then, okay? More than just sleeping or whatever uh. What word works best. Do you even know what springtime activities are. Okay, so whatever intimate explorations people get up to, since there's a bunch of people into the dating thing here, and the nose tells me people are not all about pure relations. Which is no bother to me, personally, but I also don't think people are using the rental rooms...

... Why do you have brothel rooms anyway? Seems like a weird carriage to add.

Confused but still on train so still your problem,
Lan Jingyi

Greetings, Voidtrecker Express, I'll be troubling you.

Four is not a loved number where I'm from, it's too close sounding to death, did you know that? Not sure if anyone from worlds like mine has bothered telling you this, but now you now.

What is with the saying for the month? Why are friends, new or old, equated to precious metals? That's saying they have calculatable worth, and is that how you think of us? One set of voidtreckers are silver and the other set is gold?

With considerable number disregard,
Lan Jingyi

Greetings, Voidtrecker Express, I'll be troubling you.

Heading to mission for this Salis Archipelamwhatever, but one question:

Birds? Seriously?!

Wait, two questions. Can't you provide more context! Ever?

With dubious regard,
Lan Jingyi

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